what's on your mind at age 14?

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Postby ugh raines » Sun Feb 11, 2007 2:26 am

I wrote this really lame poem when I was 14. This came to me the same year I got the Smiths self titled. I wondered if there was some connection.

won't you give me some
I'll take whatever
from anyone
I just want to be
young and free
and live out my life
just being me
now I've tilled the soil
so plant the seed
the one intended
to release me
now i hear the calling
and thoughts are falling
like I'm off a cliff
but I ain't dying
well I thank you for
all this love and war
pride resurfaced
in a lion's roar
don't you go away
if i go astray
i'll rejoice with you
like early days....
ugh raines
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