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Postby elko » Wed Oct 04, 2006 11:23 pm

[quote="The Boy with a thorn in his side"]
A piece of English homework I did last week, had to play around with register...

Just looking for some constructive criticism from those more experienced than me :)

Judgement Day

[i]5 years on. The unimaginable destruction, the horror, the breach of security, rendering all people at risk where they were previously safe…that fateful day had changed the world. He switched the television off; he had seen enough. It was time to make ready for the big day. Years of preparation, all culminating at this point, “It will all be over soonâ€
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Postby The Boy with a thorn in his side » Thu Oct 05, 2006 8:51 pm

Yeh, register is...sort of the form, it's hard to explain, but basically, I wrote a story about a law student going to an exam in the register of a piece on a suicide bomber from an action novel or something

and thanks : )
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